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Visual – Fatboy

(0:00-0:01) The video starts off with a young black male turning around towards the camera with what seems to be a drink full of alcohol in it. The young black male is in a bar and the lights are dimmed … Continue reading

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Not Because – Fatboy

1. Coats wasn’t fired because he was using a legal drug, marijuana, for a legitimate purpose for which he had a prescription. He was fired for violating workplace policy. Coats was fired for violating workplace policy, not because he was … Continue reading

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Robust Verbs – Fatboy

Original There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large … Continue reading

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Definition Rewrite – Fatboy

The Correct Amount of Sleep Oversleeping is the most devastating complication that happens to people. Most people believe that oversleeping is defined as sleeping from anything that is 12+ hours in a night. However, the actual amount of sleep that … Continue reading

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Definition – Fatboy

Needs a Title How much sleep are we truly supposed to be getting before we realize that it is too little or too much? That is the question that everybody loves to ask so that they could be prepared for … Continue reading

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Claims – Fatboy

Paragraph #7 “‘ We’re better than we were,’ Robichaux says. ‘But we still have a ways to go.‘ “ This is an ethical or morale claim because the speaker is explaining how they are overall better as a person than … Continue reading

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Whitepaper – Fatboy

1. Working Hypothesis 1 Although getting enough sleep in your life is always good, getting even a little bit over of how much you’re supposed to be getting could cause negative impact to your mental state. 1b. Working Hypothesis 2 … Continue reading

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Stone Money – Fatboy

The Million Dollar Question Money has been the key ingredient in making the world go round for as long as anybody could even remember. It is the one thing that everybody would love to have, and if they don’t have … Continue reading

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Citation – Fatboy

Money can mean many different things by the different perspectives people have on it. In the New York Times article, “The Fiction That Makes the World Go Round,” Richard Davies states, “Currency is a national bedrock that sits alongside anthems … Continue reading

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Summaries – Fatboy

Are Multivitamins Dangerous? It seems counterintuitive that multivitamins, something that you take for the sole purpose to make you and your body healthier, is being used in discussion as something that could potentially harm you. While a little under the … Continue reading

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