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Open Strong – cinderella1013

Practice Opening 1: Electric vehicles may not be as good for the environment as big companies say they are. When comparing the lifecycle of electric vehicles, EVs, to the standard gas-powered cars most of us drive, they will emit almost … Continue reading

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Visual Rewrite – cinderella1013

0:00-0:01 The ad shows a black teenage girl, maybe around 16 or 17 years old, sitting on her bed with all the lights off. She has hair extensions and buns all over her head. The only light coming into the … Continue reading

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Visual – cinderella1013

0:00-0:01 The ad starts off by showing a teenage girl, maybe around 16 or 17 years old, sitting on her bed with all of the lights off. The only light coming into the room is through the window. She is … Continue reading

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Definition Rewrite — cinderella1013

Not So Green Electric vehicles have proven to be greener than gas combustion engines when looking exclusively at the tailpipe. They emit no harmful chemicals into the atmosphere as they cruise down the highway. But the tailpipe is just the … Continue reading

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Definition — cinderella1013

Are electric vehicles actually better for the environment than their standard combustion counterparts, or do they release the same if not more amounts of harmful chemicals into the atmosphere? As more and more electric vehicles (EV) are being produced, we … Continue reading

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Claims – cinderella1013

“Brannan and Katie’s teacher have conferenced about Katie’s behavior many times.“ This is a quantitative claim as it mentions how they talked about her behavior “many times.” The amount of times they have discussed her behavior is never mentioned, but … Continue reading

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Whitepaper – cinderella1013

1. Working Hypothesis 1 Compared to newly made gas-dependent cars, electric vehicles will produce the same if not more harmful environmental emissions when means of production and lifecycle are considered. 1.a. Working Hypothesis 2 When looking at electric vehicles and … Continue reading

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Stone Money – cinderella1013

Invisible Money Ask anyone around the world what money is and you will most likely get the same answer everywhere: Money is what we use to buy things. While this is certainly true, it doesn’t actually answer the question of … Continue reading

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Citation – cinderella1013

In Richard Davies’ recent article for The New York Times, “The Fiction That Makes the World Go Round,” he reviews the book, Money: The True Story of a Made Up Thing, by Jacob Goldstein. In his article, Davies claims that … Continue reading

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Summaries – cinderella1013

It seems counterintuitive that men are the ones making laws when it comes to women’s rights. Ever since ancient times, men have had a difficult time trying to decide on the definition of rape, and when it was okay to … Continue reading

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