6 Responses to hypothesis-redbird1123

1. beforeverge says:

   September 13, 2022 at 8:39 AM

   The ideas are good, but more clearly define the effect of gun violence on a population.

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2. bitagaming says:

   September 13, 2022 at 8:42 AM

   this idea is really interesting, its happening all the time, but more clearly how gun effect human life.

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3. alwaystired247 says:

   September 13, 2022 at 8:43 AM

   Your ideas are really good and you make a really good point. Maybe you could combine these points to make one big hypothesis that is more detailed and specific. It’s a little bit unclear which of the points you’re trying to make.

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4. hollyp715 says:

   September 13, 2022 at 8:46 AM

   Your hypothesis, especially the sixth step, lacks the specificity needed to formulate your hypothesis, as well as let the reader know what you are trying to defend. However, I think this topic is wonderful, as it is a large issue in society.

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5. worldofjuice999 says:

   September 13, 2022 at 8:49 AM

   The post is great and I can understand what your saying, but I would like you to elaborate on gun violence and make it more clear to me the reader. Gun violence is a bad thing, but how are guns killing innocent bystanders. Maybe adding stray bullets from acts of gun violence kills innocent bystanders on a daily basis. Also how does gun violence lead to police brutality; are you just saying young black men in the wrong time and place leads to police brutality. I would like to add as well how are kids effected by gun violence besides the fact that they lost their parent. What did they lose by losing this parent is it guidance or love, those two factors are major in the life of a child who is growing up.

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6. thepersonindisguise says:

   September 13, 2022 at 10:26 AM

   Good starter topic but the more you get into detail the less actual gun violence is mention.

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