White Paper – rushhourillusion

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1. Working Hypothesis 1 – A reduction in anxiety, stress and depression among teenagers and students can be attributed to by listening to the tempo of music.

1a. Working Hypothesis 2 – By listening to the tempo, lyrics and genre of music, students and teenagers can reduce their stress, along with the anxiety and depression that may pair with it. 

2. Five Academic Sources

Nikola Tesla Stem High School – Lake Washington School; Utilizing Music Therapy to Help Teenagers with Depression and Anxiety, Victoria Alkin ;Pages 120-126 STEM_Journal_2017_2018.pdf (lwsd.org) 

  •  In Utilizing Music Therapy to Help Teenagers with Depression and Anxiety,  Victoria Alkin discusses the statistics and research involved in teenagers with music therapy. Alkin starts by introducing the rationale, research question and hypothesis by introducing her topic and backing up her information with statistics. Then she goes into the human participant research experiment which involves teenagers grades 9-12 to fill out a questionnaire and listen to songs. Following the explanation of the experience the author shows the research, data and statistical analysis of the outcomes by providing graphs for each topic, such as what pitch affects your mood. Lastly the author wraps up the article by providing the conclusion and the real-world relationship between music pitch and tempo with teenagers. 

How Music Affects the Brain – Hearing Institute. Deane Alban How-Music-Affects-the-Brain.pdf (hearinginstitute.co.nz)

  • In the article, How music affects the brain, written by Deane Alban, he discusses the many different benefits of music on a person. The point was made that those who listen to music and those who are musicians have high brain functionality and productivity. In which the author goes into specific detail about each subtopic and how the evidence backs up the subjects. Some of the subjects include how music can make you a better person, how it can make you more creative, can make you more productive and so on. The author finishes with wrapping up his ideas and how at any age music can improve your life drastically.

A Study of Sintered Copper Porous Surfaces Michael Dove- Proquest.com. The relationship of rhythmic and melodic perception with background music distraction in college level students – ProQuest 

In A Study of Sintered Copper Porous Surfaces by Michael Dove the topic of music’s impact arises, more specifically in the background. Within these 15 pages, Dove focuses on the different understandings and interpretations of music, but also how people can benefit from background music. Dove explains that background music may seem like nothing, but it can really cause improvement in many different categories. These can include mood improvement, anxiety reduction, mental arousal, positive mood enhancement and more. More specifically about the music itself, he also brings up the music tempo and major and minor influences from these background songs. Overall Dove explains the many different benefits from just simple background music.

***Lordier, Lara, et al. “Music Processing in Preterm and Full-Term Newborns: A Psychophysiological Interaction (PPI) Approach in Neonatal Fmri.” NeuroImage, Academic Press, 6 Apr. 2018, https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S105381191830288X.   

Rather than a generalization of music improvements, in Music Processing in Preterm and Full-Term Newborns: A Psychophysiological Interaction (PPI) Approach in Neonatal Fmri the topic gets more specific down to music and MRIs. The author explains how tempo, pitch and rhythm all affects these patients. How certain music allows for patients to calm down due to specific patterns in music. 

History in Your Hand: A Case Study of … – Proquest.comAN EXAMINATION OF THE EFFECTS OF TEMPO AND METER UPON ANXIETY REDUCTION (MUSIC, RHYTHM) – ProQuest

In An Examination Of The Effects Of Tempo And Meter Upon Anxiety Reduction, the author, John Garmo aims to explain through information the relationship between tempo and meter with anxiety reduction. The information provided was an experiment that occurred at a University.  They took these students and over the course of a few weeks would take tests and the effects of specific music on students. Garmo and others analyzed the different genres, tempos and meters involved in different songs and how they affected these college students. 

3. Topics for Smaller Papers

  1. (Definition) Music therapy is a specific branch of therapy aimed to focus on music to clinically relieve stress and accomplish goals therapeutically.  
  2. (Causal)Listening to a specific tempo of music allows one to focus on their tasks.
  3. (Rebuttal) Music can be very distracting to teenagers.

4. Current State of the Research Paper

  • My current state is that I have all of these points down, and now I just have to start writing. I am a little weary of my abilities, but I am hoping that revision and feedback for my paper will come in handy by the end of the semester. I just think my opinions have solidified because this is a topic I personally relate to, which is why I chose it. It solidified because I was able to find these sources that allowed me to dive deeper into information surrounding my topic, which just allowed me to confirm more of my hypothesis. I anticipate that my topic will be able to be proven, and be able to use my sources efficiently. 
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5 Responses to White Paper – rushhourillusion

  1. rushhourilllusion says:

    I just wanted to leave this comment to explain there are stars next to my one source/summary I am not confident in; I will be relooking back over the source and summary to revise and or change it. The feedback is just for my summaries. Thank you.

  2. davidbdale says:

    You get feedback first because you left an explanatory Reply on your FP request. 🙂

  3. davidbdale says:

    You’ve specified that you want feedback on your summaries, RH, but I don’t want to skip over the Hypotheses just yet. They make a sort of sense, but readers will appreciate some clarity.

    1. Working Hypothesis 1 – A reduction in anxiety, stress and depression among teenagers and students can be attributed to by listening to the tempo of music.

    —Here I think you mean to promise that anxiety (or ASD for Anxiety, Stress, and Depression) can be relieved by listening to music of a certain tempo or tempos.
    (Readers will be confused by your use of “attribute” and by the idea of “listening to the tempo.”)

    1a. Working Hypothesis 2 – By listening to the tempo, lyrics and genre of music, students and teenagers can reduce their stress, along with the anxiety and depression that may pair with it.

    —Here you’ve shifted your focus to Stress, not Anxiety (of the ASD group), and broadened the list of attributes that can help from tempo alone to tempo, lyrics, and genre. It’s fine to change focus. That’s the point of having multiple hypotheses. But now we have three causes and three effects. It’s hard to prove causation in a single case in 3000 words. Proving it 9 times is asking too much of a short paper.

  4. davidbdale says:

    Regarding your summaries, RH, I was about to craft a pair of sample summaries, one purposeful the other not purposeful, but I think I’ll leave that for another place and time.

    For now, let me say there is nothing valuable in your first summary regarding its IMPORTANCE to your hypothesis. It makes no claims that would qualify as evidence.

    In summaries 2, 3, 4, and 5, though, you make claims that show the essence of why summaries are valuable. The following are worth keeping:

    2. Alban claims that listening to or making music can make people of any age more creative and productive by increasing brain functionality.

    3. Dove claims that seemingly innocuous background music can reduce anxiety, improve a listener’s mood, and stimulate the mind. Tempo and key choices (specifically music in major or minor keys) affect the listener in ways I will describe after further study.

    4. Lordier and others explain how tempo, pitch and rhythm all affect how well music can calm patients undergoing an MRI.

    5. John Garmo analyzed to what degree different genres, tempos and meters of music improved college students’ performance on tests.

    Nothing essential to you or your eventual essay readers has been left out of these summaries, RH. You shouldn’t waste any words describing the process or setup of the studies UNLESS they affect persuasiveness of the evidence.

    Remember, YOU are the only important reader of these summaries. They are your chance to practice how you will USE the essential material (mostly the outcomes and conclusions) of the studies, experiments, articles to convince your readers of something in particular.

    • rushhourilllusion says:

      Thank you for the feedback! Just leaving this comment to know that I am here and have seen your feedback. I will be thoroughly rereading the feedback and making adjustments as needed.

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