A06 Safer Saws – Alex LaVallee

 

1A. “Without naming SawStop, an April, 2002 Bosch memo warned of the threat from “competitive technology.”

1B. SawStop is technology that could be highly competitive with Bosch and other powertool manufacturers.

1C. Proposal Claim

1D. The claim is that there is a threat of technology (SawStop) that would be highly competitive with the industry and something needed to be done to protect the manufacturers.

2A. “I absolutely know it saved a kid’s thumb. He would have lost his thumb.” – Chris Higginbotham

2B. The SawStop saved a student from losing a thumb, so it is worth it.

2C. Categorical Claim

2D. The claim refers to the safety and effectiveness of the SawStop and how it was worth the investment.

3A. David Peot, Ryobi’s former director of advanced technologies: “There certainly was a feeling that if a single company invents or improves a product that could have an effect on product liability, then other manufacturers could be at a disadvantage if they don’t have that on their product.”

3C. Consequential Claim

3D. If the SawStop was put into circulation, the other tablesaw manufacturers would be out of business in that department.

4A. “The table saw industry is using many of the same arguments that auto manufacturers used to delay airbag requirements for 20 years. In that time, an estimated 162,000 people died unnecessarily. In the eight years that the Power Tool Industry (PTI) has been opposing automatic safety technology for table saws, an estimated 320,000 serious table saw injuries have occurred, including 32,000 amputations.”

4B. The only reason that tablesaw manufacturers are making these arguments is because they are afraid that they are going to lose a lot of money due to a better product.

4C. Resemblance Claim

$D. The tablesaw manufacturers are being compared to the automotive manufacturers for hesitating to upgrade to a better quality and safer product.

5A. “I have the right to cut my own finger off on my tablesaw” – Pete Parillo (Woodworker, missing finger)

5B. I have the right to cut my own finger off on my tablesaw, in regards to the proposition of having SawStop mandated by the state.

5C. Definition Claim

5D. The claim, isn’t very persuasive, but should be given credit because it is coming from a a seasoned woodworker who took responsibility for his own mistake of cutting off his finger.

6A.  “Table saws cause more injuries than any other woodworking tool.”

6C. Resemblance Claim

6D. The comparison between the tablesaw and other dangerous woodworking tools and how the tablesaw is the most dangerous.

7A. “is about legislating market share and attempting to create a monopoly” – Assemblyman/Bill author, Das Williams

7B. The SawStop is focusing more on taking over the saw market than the saftey of workers.

7C. Evaluation Claim

7D. The claim makes sense because the SawStop has so many individual patents that the competition will have no way of replicating it, but the whole purpose of the product is to keep workers safe.

8A. “(SawStop) is uneconomical (for manufacturers) to make one product for the Golden State customers and a different one for the rest of the country.”- Los Angeles Times

8B. If implemented, the SawStop would dominate the market and cause problems for other saw manufacturers.

8C. Consequential Claim.

8D. The claim is stating that the economy for tablesaws  will be crippled if the SawStop is mandated in California because of the large amount of manufacturers located in California.

 

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2 Responses to A06 Safer Saws – Alex LaVallee

  1. Alex LaVallee's avatar alexlavallee1 says:

    Could I get some feedback?

    Feedback provided. —DSH

  2. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Hey, Alex!

    1. (Ask me about your quotation mark technique.)
    I think I’d call this categorical. X is a Y. Competitive technology is a threat. Your 1D is a clear proposal claim: that something needs to be done, but it’s not present in the claim you quote, just to be clear.

    2. No, it doesn’t. The claim is consequential or evaluative. It says the technology is effective. It says the technology prevented injury. It doesn’t make any claim about the cost-effectiveness of SawStop. (Of course I understand that this is a logical conclusion, for the kid who saved his thumb, but that’s irrelevant to the claim you quote.)

    3. Your 3D is way to casual to be understood clearly. “Out of business in that department” probably doesn’t mean at all what it sounds like.

    4. The paragraph you quote contains so many claims it’s impossible to evaluate as a single claim. But the summary you provide as 4B certainly doesn’t qualify. 4A is entirely about lives lost because of safety delays, not sales lost to better technology.

    You’re right though, 4A does contain a strong Resemblance claim.

    5. I agree he has the right if he prefers to exercise it. He could just as easily choose to buy a saw without SawStop from Bosch if Bosch offered SawStop as an option. So why can’t Bosch offer SawStop as an option?

    6. Evaluation claim or Comparative claim. X is greater than Y.

    7. Almost. The claim can’t be about SawStop’s inventor, since SawStop can’t legislate. Whatever group Bill is complaining about, they’re trying to legislate that the entire market embrace the product of one saw maker’s devising. The claim only makes sense if SawStop sells every saw, but what the legislation does instead is permit all makers to compete, provided they pay to include a patented device. Nothing would stop another company from challenging SawStop’s “monopoly” with getting a patent on a better blade-stopping technology.

    8. Your 8B doesn’t begin to accurately describe 8A. And 8D does an even worse job of evaluating 8A.

    What’s up here, Alex? You’re more logical than this. Want to take another crack at it? Let me know if you do revise.

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