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Reflective – alwaystired

Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development. Many times throughout the semester I reached out for feedback from not only my … Continue reading

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Bibliography – alwaystired

Bruce, E. S., Lunt, L., & McDonagh, J. E. (2018). Sleep in adolescents and young adults. Clinical Medicine. It seems counterintuitive that sleep is directly associated with a healthy mind and body, yet schools require adolescents, who are biologically prone … Continue reading

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Research – alwaystired

Dangerous High School Start-Times The schools we put our trust and money into are actively harming our children. They are doing so by beginning in the early hours of the morning, damaging their cognition and causing them to perform poorly … Continue reading

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Enough About You – alwaystired

Revised paragraph: Money seems to have a big role in our society; we can’t do much or get far if we don’t have any. Money is valuable in different ways, even when not physically visible. In today’s society we must … Continue reading

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Rebuttal Rewrite – alwaystired

Disproving Arguments Against Later School Start-Times Nothing in the world is perfect and everything is bound to have advantages and disadvantages, even an idea as beneficial as delaying school start times. Critics’ concerns are valid, but easy to argue against. … Continue reading

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Rebuttal – alwaytired

Disproving Arguments Against Later School Start-Times Nothing in the world is perfect and every idea is bound to have advantages and disadvantages. Every action ignites various consequences and some are bound to be negative. With that said, while delaying the … Continue reading

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Causal Rewrite – alwaystired

School Hours Harm Teenage Brains Starting school before the sun rises is damaging adolescents’ cognition, causing them to perform poorly in terms of academics. Whether their parents put pressure on them or they have goals for a successful future, grades … Continue reading

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Causal – alwaystired

School Hours Harm Teenage Brains Starting school before the sun rises is damaging adolescents’ cognition, causing them to perform poorly in terms of academics. Whether their parents put pressure on them, or they have a successful future in their minds, … Continue reading

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Not Because – alwaytired

1. Coats wasn’t fired because he was using a legal drug, marijuana, for a legitimate purpose for which he had a prescription. He was fired for violating workplace policy. Coats was fired for violating workplace policy, not because he was … Continue reading

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Robust Verbs – alwaystired

Original paragraph: There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a … Continue reading

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