There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

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Huge problem in Vancouver with committing crime to support their habits.The fee heroin programs are trying everything they can to stop the addicts.What the problem they may be facing is the large amount of crime rate due to the addicts.Addicts have a hard getting through daily because of there addiction they have.For example like getting there jobs and relationships and more.For addicts being addict to the drug they will do what ever needs to be done to get there hand on the drug.The crimes they committ is breaking and entering a and stealing.There is no limit to where they will go to retrieve this drug so they can get there addictions.This program will not ween the addicts off it will only save the city from rising crime rates.By providing the drug the addicts will be off the streets and which turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes and out the hospitals.The program will give them free drug so they dont have commit of get in trouble for it