Rehabilitation Realism
If a hospital were to surround one sick person with more sick patients, we only expect them to end up worse. Though when we lock away a criminal with other criminals, many are surprised to see them later return to a life of crime. Over the years countless resources have been put into rehabilitation services for prisons, but the results are always disappointing. It’s easy to point at the individual, but it’s more productive to point at the process. The common factor in all of these failings is the prison environment itself. The need for a successful program could never be found in a prison and is actively opposed by the environment that does exist within one.
According to “A Systematic Review of Criminal Recidivism Rates Worldwide: Current Difficulties and Recommendations for Best Practice,” taken from Plos One journal, recidivism is “…a broad term that refers to relapse of criminal behavior.” To look at how successful prison rehabilitation is, it is useful to analyze the recidivism rates of different countries. The same review explains that the rate of recidivism can be up to 50% in some jurisdictions, with one 3-year sample of U.S prisoners hitting 66%. Even in the current century when rehabilitation is implemented in many of these countries, their overall failure is clear.
Rehabilitation centers are places that offer a positive environment, set on creating better futures through hope and determination. In almost the complete counter to this, prisons overall are a place of punishment that destroys life and make it bleaker. In the report “‘The prison don’t talk to you about getting out of prison’: On why prisons in England and Wales fail to rehabilitate prisoners,” taken from Criminology and Criminal Justice, the faults of rehabilitation are communicated directly from prisoners. One interview comments how themselves and fellow prisoners “ ‘….haven’t got their house anymore. They haven’t got a job and they’re out there thinking, ‘How am I going to survive?’ ” Prison doesn’t let their victims leave with hope, in fact, it takes hope away. These prisoners unsurprisingly end up being released with a ‘do what needs to be done’ look on life, even if it means going back to crime.
Reentering society, a vital part of the rehabilitation process, is not a goal of prison. The isolated environment does not help this, nor do the programs. In The Prison Journal piece, “Rehabilitation Programs for Incarcerated Drug Offenders in Malaysia: Experience-Based Perspectives on Reintegration and Recidivism,” prisoners provided multiple common themes that they felt held them back from successfully getting through the process.
Having gone through a few rounds of rehabilitation programs offered in prisons, they felt these did not prepare them to face the challenges of reentering and reintegrating into society. Again, failure to cope with these challenges caused them to go back to more familiar groups with whom they were previously involved and where they found belonging and acceptance.
Teaching a prisoner not to feel like an outcast, while currently incarcerated and separated from the outside world, is a near-impossible task. The goal of prison is to use isolation as a punishment, and this punishment will always be in the way of successful rehabilitation.
Rehabilitation programs are only as good as the individuals running them, interacting with and supporting the patients on a daily basis. These people must be driven not just to do their job, but to truly help others get better. This is not the archetype for the common prison officer. Referring back to the Criminology and Criminal Justice article, the writers explain this relationship. Their job is to maintain safety, not babysit the prisoners to follow through on their program.
From the perspectives of prisoners even where officers come with good intentions, cynicism can wear them down over time and initial support for rehabilitation among prison officers may become undermined by the realities of delivering rehabilitative interventions in unfavorable conditions.
Even if they did give a true helping hand in rehabilitation, there will also be an undeniable power dynamic in place between a prisoner and an officer. Ben Crew describes this relationship in his essay “Soft power in prison: Implications for staff–prisoner relationships, liberty, and legitimacy.” Officers have the ability to make everyday life better or worse through small favors or punishments, and that never leaves the minds of those in the system. Prisoners Crew interviewed discussed being forced to put on a fake facade, saying it feels as though officers are to ““… ‘play mind games with you.’” From the prisoner’s perspective, they are constantly distrusting the people who are supposed to be guiding them. It would be like trying to trust a doctor who doesn’t seem to care if you get better or not. This then leads to problems for the officers, having to deal with prisoners not being honest and turning into “yes-men” to ease the situation, rather than to make themselves better people.
Resources are another big problem facing prison rehabilitation services. Greg Newbold comments on this issue in his piece “Criminal Reoffending and the Failure of Corrections: Rehabilitating Criminals Ain’t That Easy,” Newbold uses the example of the Integrated Offender Management program that was meant to reduce recidivism by 15% over the course of two years by matching prisoners to specific programs. Though these results never came due to multiple problems of the program in real-life use. The program was complicated for prison staff, many had problems understanding it as well as managing it in their prison system time-wise. Even when a prisoner was matched to a proper program, the resources needed to address their needs rarely existed. Time and money are both needed resources that are lacking in prison rehabilitation.
All the effort to rehabilitate prisoners comes with good intentions, but it is inherently an impossible task. Not due to the programs themselves, but because prison is not an environment that can foster it. There will always be necessary powers not prevalent, such as resources or proper support, and there will always be antagonistic factors that only suppress the rehabilitation process.
References
Bullock, K., & Bunce, A. (2020). “‘The prison doesn’t talk to you about getting out of prison’: On why prisons in England and Wales fail to rehabilitate prisoners.” Criminology & Criminal Justice, 20(1), 111–127.
Cheah, P. K., Unnithan, N. P., & Raran, A. M. S. (2020). “Rehabilitation Programs for Incarcerated Drug Offenders in Malaysia: Experience-Based Perspectives on Reintegration and Recidivism.” The Prison Journal, 100(2), 201–223.
Crewe B. “Soft power in prison: Implications for staff–prisoner relationships, liberty and legitimacy.” European journal of criminology. 2011;8(6):455-468. doi:10.1177/1477370811413805
Fazel, Seena, and Achim Wolf. “A Systematic Review of Criminal Recidivism Rates Worldwide: Current Difficulties and Recommendations for Best Practice.” PLOS ONE, Public Library of Science,
Newbold, G. (2006) “Criminal Reoffending and the Failure of Corrections: Rehabilitating Criminals Ain’t That Easy.”
I would like feedback on my arguments, as well as f they are revlenat enough to the categorical essay theme and each other. Also I did a very simple conclusion but is there a recommendation for how it should be structured to make it more effective?
Thank you for the specific instructions, Manipulator. I’m here merely to acknowledge your request this morning. I will return when I can to provide actual feedback. I’ve read your Conclusion without reading the rest of the essay, so my reaction might not be very helpful, but I see no problem except for some syntax sloppiness with the paragraph as it stands
In the 21st century . . .
Not sure we need the “warmup,” but you do state the general premise, although vaguely, that prisons aren’t conducive to rehabilitation.
I wonder if you’d be opposed to livening up the presentation with a catchy observation. For the same reason hospital patients find it hard to get healthy surrounded by sick people, convicts don’t often turn their lives around in prison.
You can explain and provide evidence once you have a reader’s attention.
When thinking of a rehabilitation center . . .
Before you can expect readers to buy into your bleak assessment of an overall failure to rehabilitate, you might need a hard statistic or two about recidivism. The anecdotal “How am I going to survive?” quote would be more compelling as an illustration AFTER readers acknowledge that the numbers tell a story.
Syntactically, you MUST get rid of the “ones,” the “yous,” and the “themselveses.” When you say “Rehabilitation is for your future, I read that as my future and resent you for it. Don’t do that.
Your sentences are mostly empty of subjects to do the job of the verbs.
“there is an attempt to create a picture” takes place in no one’s head. (Don’t put it in my head.)
“to make a better future for oneself” also refers to no one.
“a place of punishment that destroys one’s life” is another phantom.
“Rehabilitation is for your future” I have already rejected.
even “the faults of prison rehabilitation are communicated” should put those words in someone’s mouth.
“Prison don’t let you leave with hope” incarcerates me again.
“you end up with less than you had before you went in” locks me up three times.
a “mindset” that leads “to recidivism” attaches to no one at all.
Reentering society . . .
As before, anecdotal evidence, no matter how strong, from prisoners who apparently have not found successful transitions to law-abiding society, will be more powerful once we ACKNOWLEGE the gravity of the problem, which you must demonstrate.
The quote itself is very disorienting. The speaker comes out of prison and reunites with addicts and pushers. Then claims that IN PRISON we can relax without “proving ourselves.” That appears to mean he doesn’t have to behave normally. But what he treasures about his pusher friends is that “we can just behave normally.” I’m missing something.
Having a strong community . . .
You haven’t spelled out very well what you would expect of a successful rehabilitation program. Presumably it would prepare inmates with job skills, new friends, a place to live away from their old cronies, much of which would have to be accomplished AFTER their release. Readers want to know what you expect the prisons to do WHILE offenders are in their custody. It’s fine to claim they’re not doing their job, but we’re unsure what you would say IS their job.
Rehabilitation programs are only as good . . .
Interesting you refer to your subjects here as “patients.” Is this an unformed analogy?
Is the quote supposed to say “THAT the officers couldn’t give a monkey’s [something]?” It’s not reading right.
At the risk of repeating myself, these prisoner complaints are sounding really whiny. They may have good reason to complain, but they probably all pled “not guilty” at their trials too.
Even if they did give a true helping hand . . .
I’m unclear how this example illuminates the rehabilitation experience. I understand guards and other officials have both soft and hard power over prisoners, but not how that would interfere with a program designed to transition convicts to a successful “afterlife” upon their release. Maybe the prisoners have to “fake” wanting to reform to appease the program officials (and parole board), but what’s the motivation for officers to put on any sort of facade? I’m just not getting it.
Rehabilitation centers that yield results also have the ability to put all their resources into their programs, when prisons are forced to stretch themselves thin . . . .
Read that sentence again. It sounds like the opposite of what you might want it to mean.
I guess a failed program has some persuasive power, Manipulator, but it would be much MORE persuasive if it were the Crown Jewel of a nationwide, fully-funded, much-anticipated program that failed. That the program was “never implemented properly” surely explains its failure. It doesn’t demonstrate that a well-implemented program would be doomed.
All the effort to rehabilitate prisoners . . .
After 1000 words, I don’t have a clear sense of what a rehabilitation program actually IS, Manipulator. And I can’t say I could articulate the inherent features of a prison that are so antagonistic to such a program succeeding. I should know more about both those issues by the time I get to your conclusion.
Thank you for the feedback. I’ve gone back and tried to add some new information while also making some other points clearer to how they tie into my argument.
Much better, Manipulator. You do a good job of preparing readers for the points you’re about to make, therefore increasing the likelihood they’ll be persuaded. Let me know if you want to proceed further with structural/argument improvements, or whether you need advice for a fine-tuning round. (You make repeat errors in punctuating your quotations, for example.)